SC- Beatrix potter

[ngotrung]

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

[thuong1]

Xem ra có C là khả dĩ nhở?
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

[huongnd]

Mình cũng vote cho C.

Câu A, B, E đếu mập mờ ở cụm từ "them", câu D thì lại dùng "coordinated".

[vanvicvic]

Nhìn từ A đến E, còn lại 2 câu B,C là có vẻ hợp lý, do bắt lỗi Misplaced Modifier.
B sai vì "them" không refer rõ đến cái gì.

Cuối cùng, C chắc là đáp án anh Trung nhỉ?

[Cuongdk]

Mình cũng vote cho C.

Câu A, B, E đếu mập mờ ở cụm từ "them", câu D thì lại dùng "coordinated".

Nhìn từ A đến E, còn lại 2 câu B,C là có vẻ hợp lý, do bắt lỗi Misplaced Modifier.
B sai vì "them" không refer rõ đến cái gì.

Cuối cùng, C chắc là đáp án anh Trung nhỉ?

Câu này em cũng chọn C

[Trang]

Xin phép anh Trung em lại vào đây lý sự nhé :p

Chỉ có trong mệnh đề phụ bắt buộc, người ta mới được phép bỏ modifier và động từ to be. Còn mệnh đề phụ bắt đầu bằng Ving sau dấu phẩy, nó sẽ bổ nghĩa cho cả câu đấy. Trong câu A, "carefully coordinating them with her narratives" là mệnh đề phụ không bắt buộc, nên nó cần có modifier, cụ thể là which, hence A out.

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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

[ngotrung]

Good explanation, Trang! OA is C